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Destroyed Trust
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Lies like crushed roses pressed between the pages of your lips.
Watermelon gloss trying to cover up the rottenness of deceit;
Whatever truth you hide spoiled as well.
Don't touch me.
Truth hurts for a moment but lies hurt forever.
Especially ones crushed between the inviting petals of your lips.
Watermelon gloss trying to cover up the rottenness of deceit;
Whatever truth you hide spoiled as well.
Don't touch me.
Truth hurts for a moment but lies hurt forever.
Especially ones crushed between the inviting petals of your lips.
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The line in my poem was "even as crushing lies make so sweet a bed."
~DontStopTheRain commented "whenever I read the word "crushing" I always think of rose petals."
That made me think of "lies like crushed roses."
And here we are
It feels to me like this needs something more. Any suggestions? Someone else want to write the next verse? Should I take my poem and stick it? hehe Talk to me!!
WOOOHOOO! Rage stepped up! [link] Anyone else??
Edit: check it out what ~Wombat-Pentagram did: [link] YAY!
~DontStopTheRain commented "whenever I read the word "crushing" I always think of rose petals."
That made me think of "lies like crushed roses."
And here we are
It feels to me like this needs something more. Any suggestions? Someone else want to write the next verse? Should I take my poem and stick it? hehe Talk to me!!
WOOOHOOO! Rage stepped up! [link] Anyone else??
Edit: check it out what ~Wombat-Pentagram did: [link] YAY!
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Very good, strong imagery