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It's bold and raw and bleeding and torn
It's more, too much more.
I cover my ears to block out your scream
but I cannot look away.
Too much too soon
Too raw from the last time
Don't call me that
I didn't mean to push you
stop. please.
I can't. not again.
not so soon
maybe never again
don't touch me
Too raw too red
I think I'm bleeding
PLEASE!

No.

I can't
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~BackupPanic wrote [link] and [link]

I read them back to back and it was nearly overwhelming….
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~BackupPanic:iconBackupPanic: Oct 11, 2008, 8:03:59 PM
Of course it was, I'm just that awesome!

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And now Snow White lay a long, long time in her coffin,
and she did not change, but looked as if she were asleep,
for she was as white as snow, as red as blood,
and her hair was as black as ebony.

The Brothers Grimm, Snow White
*EatingMyOwnFears:iconEatingMyOwnFears: Oct 11, 2008, 8:10:20 PM
hehe.

Glad you like it! :glomp:

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MUFFINS!
We, the voices of you head, demand MUFFINS!

and those multi colored party hats. But mostly the muffins!
~BackupPanic:iconBackupPanic: Oct 11, 2008, 8:13:43 PM
:cuddle:

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And now Snow White lay a long, long time in her coffin,
and she did not change, but looked as if she were asleep,
for she was as white as snow, as red as blood,
and her hair was as black as ebony.

The Brothers Grimm, Snow White
*EatingMyOwnFears:iconEatingMyOwnFears: Oct 11, 2008, 8:15:39 PM
:love:

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MUFFINS!
We, the voices of you head, demand MUFFINS!

and those multi colored party hats. But mostly the muffins!
~e--motiona--l:icone--motiona--l: Oct 11, 2008, 11:11:04 PM
Lol i read this on his page thing and liked it. Im glad you posted it.

His were very......wow wernt they?

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Why did you have to shoot me through the heart?
Where do you think you shot me?
*EatingMyOwnFears:iconEatingMyOwnFears: Oct 11, 2008, 11:13:25 PM
oh my goodness yes. Read them back to back and had to get something out before I imploded. hehe

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MUFFINS!
We, the voices of you head, demand MUFFINS!

and those multi colored party hats. But mostly the muffins!
~e--motiona--l:icone--motiona--l: Oct 11, 2008, 11:14:59 PM
Haha :w00t:

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Why did you have to shoot me through the heart?
Where do you think you shot me?
*EatingMyOwnFears:iconEatingMyOwnFears: Oct 12, 2008, 6:12:09 AM
:dance:

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MUFFINS!
We, the voices of you head, demand MUFFINS!

and those multi colored party hats. But mostly the muffins!
~reivax:iconreivax: Oct 12, 2008, 1:29:38 PM
OK...

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