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Remember when things were clear
and we were here
with everything to share
learning what was dear
together.

Remember memories most blessed
are the greatest
better than the rest
made with the best
of intentions.

Remember our first dance?
After exchanged glance
a possible chance
to start a romance
of two friends.

Remember our first kiss?
the flavor of chocolate chips
mingling on your lips
brushed together the tips
of our noses.

Remember we were surprised
and realized
of actions implied
we had crossed the lines
drawn by others.

Oh how time flies
it passed us by
divided by space and time
but now we must ask why?
Why did we drift apart?

Those days need to return
days before concern
before the burn
to solve love spurned
that we might dance again?
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:iconaurayathewhite:
:)

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Can we pretend I'm amazing? Instead of what we both know...

Close your eyes, for your eyes will only tell the truth, and the truth isn't what you want to see. In the dark it is easy to pretend, that the truth is what it ought to be <333
:iconeatingmyownfears:
:)

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Dear Peter,

I have penguins. I don't think you can get much cooler than that.

Kindly,
Antartica
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You both did a great job.

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Blackbird singing in the dead of night.

My youtube [link]
:iconcaroncecilia:
awesome....i can hear it being read at a poetry reading....good job y'all!

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yeah, I'm one of those "I really like this, good job!" critics. So sue me...
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Wonderful, hun :heart:

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:icondarkdoggy696:
awesome

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écrire, c'est ma thérapie

paradis perdu où es-tu? Je te cherche, mais jamais je ne te trouve...
:iconwolfenlied:
Is there a story behind this?

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Contrary to popular belief, failing at failing does not make you a success.
:iconalwaysanunquietmind:
interesting style... almost a rap...

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why isn't there another word for thesaurus?
:iconeatingmyownfears:
Thanks! :hug:

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Dear Peter,

I have penguins. I don't think you can get much cooler than that.

Kindly,
Antartica

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