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I've been scribbled out ~ lost it all in the fight ~
at one point I even forgot what I was fighting for.

But I do know this:  they are all gone. I am not sure if I just misplaced my pencil or someone else won my words ~ as if they are stapled to some random wall with a pretty blue ribbon and I am left with an honorable mention plaque made from Paper Mache.

Or maybe it is me that is scribbled out.  Someone has taken their dulled pencil in fist and rubbed the paper raw, rubbed it right through until all that is left is a huge hole and the desk is covered with a thick layer of lead.

Is that all I am? lead on plywood? Someone's stick figure to delete at their whim?

I don’t know.

It’s been one of those days … weeks … years…

She promises it will get better.

Or she would if she knew how to word it without coming across cliché.

Either way I understand. That part at least. The rest … well I’m going to see if I can find a new pencil and start from there.
I'm fine.

Really.

I've just ... been there.

Just wish I could have/would have something more than just agreeing.

Edit 20091018: Special thanks to ~DontStopTheRain for use of her icon :hug:
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:iconloofsydobon:
looFsydoboN Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2009   Writer
The icon fits very well. Wonderful, poignant piece.
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EatingMyOwnFears Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2009
thank you so much! :love:
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IsabellaMichel Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2009  Student Writer
Nice piece. :nod: :heart:
It really had a nice flow to it, but still sad.
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EatingMyOwnFears Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2009
Thank you, sweetie!
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razzigyrl Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009  Professional Artisan Crafter
For some reason this brings to mind an old story of yours (i think it was yours) The person writing the journal... I can't remember most of it, just that they seemed to be unsure of their own perceptions...

!yoJ
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EatingMyOwnFears Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009
this particular one was actually from April. I just updated it with the new picture. :)
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DontStopTheRain Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009
No problem :hug:

The poems really nice btw, your really good at writting stuff people can relate to ^^

DontStopTheRain
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EatingMyOwnFears Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009
:hug: thanks!!
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DontStopTheRain Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2009
^^

DontStopTheRain
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reivax Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2009  Student Filmographer
This is neat.
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