literature

Truth of Hate

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Published: Apr 5, 2009

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Literature Text

You know I hate you right?

For the record I know you despise me even more.

I'm not even sure why except to say I showed up at a new school one day and there were instant daggers between us.

We’ve been sparring ever since.

Verbal insults traded when we don’t have the time to take pose and strike and nasty bruises when we do.

You represent all that I strive for and everything I’m not. Rich, Cocky, Smart, Athletic, Quick Witted, Handsome.

And there in lies the unwelcome truth of the matter.

If you were to ever to actually touch me with less than spite in your eyes, I’d kill you.

Mostly for fear that I might just touch you back.

I was reading too much ... um ... yeah.

Edit: 2011.08.10 I took out this line "Did I mention we have the same Sensei? You'd think a nice sized town such as this would have more than one decent dojo. Apparently not."
It showed possible bakground but it wasn't necessary for the feel of the poem/story.

lol. oh happy editting